When Bad Books Happen to People Who Don't Download the Sample First: A Cautionary Tale. The note from the author says that it's a revised version containing corrections of previous grammatical errors, but my guess is that what it doesn't say is that they added new ones. Either that, or the old version was just a bunch of random words. The grammatical construction is so bad I was laughing on page 2 and crying on page 3. And I am as far from the grammar police as it gets. So now I'm not only thinking about the "kill it with fire" shelf, I'm also considering the "monkeys with red pens make poor editors" shelf.